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Wednesday, May 25

  1. page kick him edited You lift your leg up and kick him in the knee but just like the mirror your leg goes right through…
    You lift your leg up and kick him in the knee but just like the mirror your leg goes right through him and your eyes widen. Your hair still in his grasp starts to tear from your scalp and you whimper into his hand as you trip. You begin to fall but your blonde locks are the only thing keeping you above the water. He takes his clown claws and rips at your wrists, blood escaping from your skin. The sight of blood makes your head spin and you relax your muscles as you slide into an uncomfortable sleep. You wake up to the sound of rustling of metal. You look over and see Josh struggling to break free of chains tied to his ankles. You smile but frown realizing you’re in the same position. You call out to him and he looks up in a quick motion and screams. You jump slightly and try to grab hold of him but he moves backwards and kicks at your hand. You see the fear in his eyes but why is he scared of you. He looks very distressed and broken, bruises all over his arms and a still bleeding cut above his eye. The blood trickles down the side of his face. He tries harder to get free but to no avail. You look at him with sincerity but he doesn’t accept. Little did you know though that during your encounter with the “humorous” beast was that Josh was being dragged over to the bumper cars. He was taped to the seat and forced to be the target for all the carnies. They hit him over and over again and he was slammed into the steering wheel. You sigh and pray inside your head. Suddenly the door across from you both is quickly opened and Ms. Gretchen stands in the way of the light. You look at the floor watching her moves in the cold reflection. She walks over to Josh and lifts him off the ground by the front of his shirt and throws him in front of you but he doesn’t go too far because of the chains. He doesn’t make a sound but just coughs fiercely. She puts one of her old boney feet on the back of his t and presses harder into his spine her heel grinding through his skin. He flinches but doesn’t show any sign of pain what so ever. She kicks him in the side and his eyes slide close as his body stops moving up and down. You know he is dead. You look away from the floor because you hate to see the tears drain from your eyes as you are there vulnerable. She laughs and looks you in the eyes to show that she has no regret or guilt. You notice that now that Josh is gone and most likely Lizzie, you have no reason to remain alive. You look at her and smile telling her that you’re not scared and can take anything. She stops laughing and scowls at you removing the chains from the pole from the wall but not from your ankle. She grips your shoulder and forces you to walk along side her. She takes you to the Dare Devil and attaches the chain to the safety bar. You now know how she is going to end you. She walks away and you try to get loose but no such luck as you feel the rollercoaster begin to move. You are alongside the coaster and can’t get in so it is just going to drag you and eventually pull you apart with force until your nothing but an ankle attached to a roaming rollercoaster. You begin to lift off the ground as the coaster rises. You feel the pain in your ankle as it is trying to carry your weight. You hang on to the side of the cart to ease the pain but it only decreases a bit. I'm guessing you guys can imagine what happens next. I can’t go into details because some viewer discretion is advised.
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    6:23 am
  2. page go back to the carnival edited You and Lizzie got scared and decided to run back to the carnival. When you got there you guys ran…
    You and Lizzie got scared and decided to run back to the carnival. When you got there you guys ran into the first line you saw. The line was for the funhouse. When you two entered the funhouse, it was all dark. Someone came up behind Lizzie and slit her throat. “Lizzie?” You say and turn and see her laying on the floor dead and blood flowing out of her neck. You scream and try to run out but you are locked in. You scream for help but no one hears. You see a dark shape coming towards you. You run to the stairs and start going up them but the step breaks. Your leg is stuck in the stairway. You hear someone fiddling at the lock, but it’s too late you hear a gunshot and that is the end to your life.
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    6:20 am
  3. page remain still edited You decide to stay still frozen and very scared. But are still worried about what had happened to …
    You decide to stay still frozen and very scared. But are still worried about what had happened to Josh. But in the tremor you forget everything and try to stay calm knowing that the cannis might let you go thinking you’re useless. Or, might end up food to something terrible and vicious. Then you noticed that you’re not moving anymore and have feared for the worst. He dropped you on the floor and you hit your head really hard. After, a couple of minutes you wake up and the next thing you know you are tied up and are being pushed down a well in the forest. You can’t swim and are tied you died there.
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    6:15 am

Tuesday, May 24

  1. page house of mirrors edited ... of the scary carnie horror in front ... the ceiling. Its It’s really deep ... slowly …
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    of the scary carniehorror in front
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    the ceiling. ItsIt’s really deep
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    slowly sinking. You struggle and grab hold of the closest thing to you. It is hard and cold and covered in something very rough. It starts to move and you let go. You are scared to turn around so you just stand there until you feel something tickle the side of your neck. Some ones breathe is grazing your skin and you sense the presence of someone behind you. They grasp your wrist and spin you around to face them. Eyes, red and big, almost animated, stare at you above a grin revealing crooked, faded, teeth that look like daggers. You try to scream but ripped red gloves cover your mouth blocking your cries. It laughs and pulls your hair sending tears to flow from your eyes. You hear it hit the water and dissolve into the rest. You decide whether or not you should kick him or run or just except fate.
    Should you: kick him or remain still?
    kick him remain still

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    9:08 am
  2. page call 911 edited You and Lizzie call 911. Josh’s mother drives back to see Josh and overheard you and Lizzie callin…
    You and Lizzie call 911. Josh’s mother drives back to see Josh and overheard you and Lizzie calling 911. She gets out of the car and grabs a metal bat that was on the street then beats Lizzie to death. And she smashes your cell phone. You try to run but before you take another step she hits you with the bat. You were knocked out, and when you woke up she was dragging you by your hair up the street. Your clothes were drenched in blood and your flip flops weren’t on your feet anymore. Your eye sight was blurry and all you could feel was burning in your head and feet. Then you see her van, crashed into an old oak tree. She opens the trunk and throws you in and then BANG she shuts it. You laid there dying then you heard police sirens and you slowly close your eyes, this was it, it’s all over now. YOU’RE DEAD.
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    8:59 am
  3. page tunnel of love edited You, Josh, and Lizzie were in line for the tunnel of love. They meet up with a girl named Jade. Jo…
    You, Josh, and Lizzie were in line for the tunnel of love. They meet up with a girl named Jade. Josh likes her. He asked her to go in the tunnel of love with him. She agrees. So while Jade and Josh are in the tunnel of love the boat stops moving. The lights and music go off. Josh hears Jade screaming and the lights and music go back on. Jade is gone. Josh starts calling her name. Something drips on the top of your head. You look up and Jade is hanging by a rope and dripping blood. Josh runs out of the tunnel of love and jumps on his bike. As Josh is pedaling as fast as he can home he is suddenly hit by a car. He dies on impact. The driver comes out of the car and it is his mother. She drags his body and his bike to the ditch and leaves him there. And she drives away. You and Lizzie witnessed this. You two were following Josh when he left the tunnel.
    Do you call 911 or go back to the carnival?
    cal 911 go back to the carnival

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    8:58 am
  4. page Language arts edited You and your best friend Josh were hanging out at your house waiting for Lizzie to get there so you…
    You and your best friend Josh were hanging out at your house waiting for Lizzie to get there so you guys could go to the carnival. You and Josh were playing a very deep game of I spy until you heard a knock on the front door. Both of you stumbled to get to the door. You pushed Josh out of the way and sprinted to the door, but tripped over the rug. You fell face front into the soft carpet. Josh hopped over you and opened the door to a bright and happy Lizzie. Lizzie was pale with dark brown eyes and straight red hair that reached her shoulders. She was very pretty and always had a smile on her face. She looked at your very frustrated body sprawled across the floor and snickered. You got up and smoothed out your tank top. You guys departure and hopped on your bikes. Down the road you saw an old lady rocking back in forth in her noisy porch chair. She never talked to anyone and always had her cat, Muffins, in her lap. Her name was Ms. Gretchen. She always had a bitter pain in her eyes and watched you with an intent glare that could kill. She had been your neighbor for your whole life. You’ve only seen her happy once. When you were out playing with Lizzie in your yard and she came out giddy and bright to get her mail but after that day she seemed grouchy and disrespectful. As you passed she looked directly at your patrolling figure and scowled. You were scared and froze, one foot on the hard cement and the other on the pedals. She stopped rocking and you saw her cat slowly reveal its sharp white canines. You heard Josh call your name and snapped back to reality. You pedaled away scared out of your mind. You guys parked your bikes and locked them up. Lizzie ran around in tight circles screaming about how much fun you guys were going to have. Josh giggled at the sight and you were lost in your thoughts thinking about the old lady’s glare. You guys ran to get in line for the Dare Devil. You all are jumping up and down with excitement. Finally it’s your turns and you get in on the same row. The safety bar comes down and latches you in. You take in a deep breath. You have always been a little scared of heights. Slowly you start to move and rise up the first hill. The squeak of the wheels and carnival music block out the rambling of Lizzie next to you. You are feeling kind of light headed. You look down even though you know that it will only make you sicker. The first drop wasn’t as frightening as you thought it would be but then you notice how tall the second one is and stiffen. You dig your nails into the plush interior of the seat and clench your teeth. You close your eyes and feel the rush of the wind as you begin to descend. The air hits you hard in the face and you let out a blood curdling scream as you go upside down and around in loops. You guys come to a stop and you rush to get out, fidgeting with the safety bars. You jump out and run to the gate to puke. Josh comes behind you and holds your hair back. Lizzie comes screaming about the adrenaline and dances around like an idiot. She asks what should you guys go on and you have the options of house of mirrors and the tunnel of love.
    So where do you go: the house of mirrors or the tunnel of love.?
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    of mirrors Tunnel of love
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    8:57 am
  5. page house of mirrors edited You all head towards the House of Mirrors and you still feel a little woozy. You think that the ho…
    You all head towards the House of Mirrors and you still feel a little woozy. You think that the house of mirrors won’t be that bad, at least your feet never leave the ground. You’re in line and feel a cold gust of wind. Your hair gets stuck to your lip gloss and you freak out not knowing. You shiver and Josh gives you his jacket. You smile at him and it’s your guys turn to go inside. It suddenly gets dark and you can see a thin strip of light reflecting off one of the mirrors. You see Lizzie run off behind you somewhere. Josh grabs your wrist and drags you towards a random mirror. You look and laugh because you appear to be very tall and skinny even though you’re actually short and average. You both giggle and move on to the next one. Out of nowhere the carnival music stops and you don’t hear the pitter patter of the converse that Lizzie is wearing. The lights become completely dark and you hear a loud screech before dead silence again. You panic in your mind but stay calm outer wise. You call out to Josh but get no reply. You struggle to reach out for his hand but only feel air. You don’t know where to go considering you can’t see anything. You hear a cackle in the distance and jump. You hesitate to say anything but decide against it. You try to remember which way you came. Then one by one the lights flicker on. You look around but see nothing but out of the corner of your eye a striped form is standing still. You whip around and scream because of the scary carnie in front of you. It is visible in the mirror but as soon as you turn around you only see the polka dot fabric of the tent. The faint sound of josh’s voice is heard near you but your sure no one’s there. You glare at your reflection thinking that somehow it is your fault. You reach out and try to punch the mirror but your fist goes right through it and you fall in. How impossible you think. You end up in swampy, mucky water. You hear drops of water spill from the ceiling. Its really deep and you can feel yourself slowly sinking.
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    8:56 am
  6. page Language arts edited You and your best friend Josh were hanging out at your house waiting for Lizzie to get there so you…
    You and your best friend Josh were hanging out at your house waiting for Lizzie to get there so you guys could go to the carnival. You and Josh were playing a very deep game of I spy until you heard a knock on the front door. Both of you stumbled to get to the door. You pushed Josh out of the way and sprinted to the door, but tripped over the rug. You fell face front into the soft carpet. Josh hopped over you and opened the door to a bright and happy Lizzie. Lizzie was pale with dark brown eyes and straight red hair that reached her shoulders. She was very pretty and always had a smile on her face. She looked at your very frustrated body sprawled across the floor and snickered. You got up and smoothed out your tank top. You guys departure and hopped on your bikes. Down the road you saw an old lady rocking back in forth in her noisy porch chair. She never talked to anyone and always had her cat, Muffins, in her lap. Her name was Ms. Gretchen. She always had a bitter pain in her eyes and watched you with an intent glare that could kill. She had been your neighbor for your whole life. You’ve only seen her happy once. When you were out playing with Lizzie in your yard and she came out giddy and bright to get her mail but after that day she seemed grouchy and disrespectful. As you passed she looked directly at your patrolling figure and scowled. You were scared and froze, one foot on the hard cement and the other on the pedals. She stopped rocking and you saw her cat slowly reveal its sharp white canines. You heard Josh call your name and snapped back to reality. You pedaled away scared out of your mind. You guys parked your bikes and locked them up. Lizzie ran around in tight circles screaming about how much fun you guys were going to have. Josh giggled at the sight and you were lost in your thoughts thinking about the old lady’s glare. You guys ran to get in line for the Dare Devil. You all are jumping up and down with excitement. Finally it’s your turns and you get in on the same row. The safety bar comes down and latches you in. You take in a deep breath. You have always been a little scared of heights. Slowly you start to move and rise up the first hill. The squeak of the wheels and carnival music block out the rambling of Lizzie next to you. You are feeling kind of light headed. You look down even though you know that it will only make you sicker. The first drop wasn’t as frightening as you thought it would be but then you notice how tall the second one is and stiffen. You dig your nails into the plush interior of the seat and clench your teeth. You close your eyes and feel the rush of the wind as you begin to descend. The air hits you hard in the face and you let out a blood curdling scream as you go upside down and around in loops. You guys come to a stop and you rush to get out, fidgeting with the safety bars. You jump out and run to the gate to puke. Josh comes behind you and holds your hair back. Lizzie comes screaming about the adrenaline and dances around like an idiot. She asks what should you guys go on and you have the options of house of mirrors and the tunnel of love.
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    tunnel of love.love.?
    House of mirrors

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    8:55 am

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